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[Frantic]

Stopped working after first level

The game wouldn't let me go to level 2!!!

[Grey-Matter]

Awesome Idea, Awesome Game

Love the game, my only problem with it is when there are a lot of particle on screen it gets a little laggy, which is expected. I couldn't tell if you used bitmaps or not for this because it was so fast, but if you didn't, I highly suggest using bitmap data

[- colorwars -]

pretty good, but the same as all your other games

Its a good game, dont get me wrong, I just think you need a little more innovation in your games than just arcade-style shooting games. Yes i know that each one is different and has something unique about it, and I also know that you make some really original games too, but a lot of the ones you've released recently are of the same 'style.' I dont really know what im getting at, because its not my job and i dont have the authority to tell you to make different games, so you can just ignore this whole 'mini-rant' if you like. also, i dont understand why you would give credit to Luminara where it is definately not due. You were making these types of games before Luminara, so its really not inspired by it. Also, Luminara was not the first particle shooter. It was probably the best in terms of being the most famous. I have had some serious problems with people saying my game Shred Zone was a copy of Luminara and how I decompiled the game and just changed the graphics. Luminara is a great game, and I give mad props to jmtb02 for it, but it wasnt the first, and its not the standard for paritcle shooters. ok now that im done with that:
I really liked the game in theory, but when I played for about a minute, I got bored. I dont know if there are different enemies or powerups or something, but I didnt see any while I was playing. Overall, good game.

Coolio-Niato responds:

Thanks for the (lengthy) review x] Lateley I've enjoyed making abstract shape-games, only ones before this that were similar were prob. RhythmBlaster 1/2 and R,Snake.

I mentioned luminara, not as a credit, but rather as the reason for my inspiration. Some games I create are inspired by others, and Luminara really inspired me to create this game. It doesn't matter that it isn't the first particle shooter, its just the basis for this one =)

The game does get harder with newer enemies, soon your screen would have swarmed with enemies. Glad you enjoyed it.

Coolio-N

[Pizza Tycoon v1]

Needs a lot of work

Its a good start, but it needs a lot of work. The game is completely random, so theres no point to charging low prices because the same amount of customers come for high prices. You could try something like:
customers = Math.round(random(popularity)/price) or something like that. add in popularity so that as the game progresses, people care less about paying high prices. the game also needs recipes + menus and you need to have to stock up on supplies. I dont know the extent of your programming skills, but i'd be glad to offer you some help if you need it. Good luck with the game!

[BirdBallz]

High scores dont work

Excellent game, a couple of minor glitches, but the highscores all come up as SHIT

[Uncle Sam]

contest?!?!

you dont actually expect to win the contesti with this do you?

tedfuzz responds:

Yes.

[::The Assasin::]

awesome graphics

nice game, a little short but good nonetheless. If you have any free time, do you think you could teach me how to do those 3d graphics? thanks,
izzy